I have been a bit sidetracked, distracted, and stuck for a couple weeks.  The biggest reason I haven't done any more editing is because I was stuck.  My structure became a jumbled mess and I got bogged down trying to fix it (not knowing how).  Finally, after backing away from it for a couple weeks, it's 'fixed', for now.  Basically, it's good enough for now.  There is part of it that I'm sure needs more work, but I just want to get through round one of editing.  (And if I don't move on, I'll just stay stuck) So:  on I move.